Samoochi - Page 1 Beta

Alrighty, what you're looking at right now is the first page of my new handdrawn original series Samoochi....
Or at least the beta version of it.

See this is the first time I'm making a full comic series like this and I'm still a little unsure about what techniques to use and whether or the art style will work, etc, etc, so I thought I'd posted a beta version to give you a rough idea of the story concept for the comic as well as what a full handdrawn series by me would look like.

Please comment as I need all the feedback and/or tips I need before I start this series for real.